Hey everyone..I am hoping my fellow dive friends and business minds can shoot me their opinions on a temporary flyer/website blurb I made.
I have a logo in mind for our service that is in the "development" stage, but in the meantime, we have instructors and shops wanting something to post so I made this...
I respect you guys a lot and will value any opinions in any direction.
I want it to be "eye-catching" but not ridiculous...
Is it great?
Is it too busy?
Are there too many words??

Thanks in advance for your help!

(Message edited by kristi_tn on August 11, 2008)

(Message edited by kristi_tn on August 11, 2008)

(Message edited by modfreddie on August 11, 2008)

Kristi nice work but I am afraid I will have to pull it for Self Promo.. Sorry.. Try putting it in your profile!

She's fast Krispi, but right.

oh guys...didn't think of that
sorry

can I still ask for opinions if it is my profile pic??

OK..slapped myself,
SLAP!!

(Message edited by kristi_tn on August 11, 2008)

You can add the web page to your profile.
Look at Freddie's profile.

Don't think you can use that as a profile pic.

You can ask people if it's ok with them to email it to them for input.

fast Freddie...LOL

OK...thx Jerry

If I were you I would take my numbers off the poster for the net.. just being cautious here

Krispy, send it to me via e-mail, will look at it and get back to you.

thx Tom!

I don't mean to be a bad girl..it just sneaks up on me,

Krispi, send it along dear girl.

thank you Jerry..

I also put a link to Flickr on my profile page...you give such wonderful advise Jerry,

I like the web page colors, lay out, over all sharp look. The colors adjusted picture really sets the look - really attracts attention. I do find the large black fancy font text a bit difficult to read on the blue background. This distracts from the message - imho. I really do like the over all look. I am learning Dream Weaver and setting up a web site. I like yours as an example of a page lay out that is different enough to draw the readers attention. Good job. While as Fredster says you may not want phone numbers on it, maybe you do for the poster and if you have business phone lines for poster or web page "blurb" .. . . you do need to provide a means to contact you .. maybe an email link Good luck!